Anyone want to make a story?

welovehina · 2010-06-07T00:31:41+00:00

i got bored, and i was wondering if we should write a story together? here is what i think we should do. A: Come up with a basic storyline. B: Develop chara...

welovehina

yes. i am glad this has taken off. however, with a project this large, we need a way to split the labor. what i feel we need to do is write small stories, each around individual characters. these can involve other characters, but in this case, the writer should involve the characters creator. this way, the character still embodies the creators original perception of said character.
but, before that, we still need to come up with the prelude, pretext, and what happens at the beginning of the war (ie: why the conflict, ect...)

we also need people who are willing to proof read others work for errors. at the same time, we also need people who will help compile the work.

and jumping back to a previous point, the chapters could range from a paragraph introducing the character to 30 to 40 pages (or even longer).

in the case of the protagonist, it would need to be a committed writer who would write quite a bit.

welovehina

once again folks, i am grateful that all of you are participating in this. props to everyone.

well, here we go again with my directional pushes.

we need to come up with a timeline for the story. not for specific events, because these can be filled in later, but so we can base our stories off of the timeline. for example, we need something like AD and BC. If there is a world religion that would clearly be what the acronym would be based off of, or if there are several religions, it could be something like BM and AM (before the discovery of magic and after the discovery of magic). then, we also need to base our time accordingly to the acronym. have the floating states just discovered magic? or have they been on their roost for a long time, mastering the art?

and ill get around to finishing up my first story, but i am still preparing my students for finals XD

welovehina

here is what i have so far

if you could all write a description of your character like mugon did, that would be great.

welovehina

ill be taking a short week long hiatus as i will be in the us military base on puerto rico.

welovehina

Meri;157515 wrote
I think it will be more tag team written as the goodies and baddies...
But ofcourse everyone can give some input, and eventually everything will be put together to one main version.

However, this story was Hina's idea, so she might have something else in mind :P

hmm. well firsr of all, im a guy XD

and what i was hoping was to make a compilation of short stories (1 to infinite pages long) from here, we could compile it into a short book about the world that we have created.
however, as the story progresses, we will have to see about that though, as we may not be able to do this. i dont know yet, as the project is moving in a different direction then i planned.

and this will most likely be my last post untill next wendsay

welovehina

i am back... and ready to push you people along. however, my flight was delayed, and i got home a day late. (ill have some pictures up for you guy later and some great stories as well). anyway, ill read over what you all posted and add it to the file, then push you guys and spark up some conversation. however, it is 0300 and i am tired. just popped in to say hi!

welovehina

Well, I had some free time today so here is my part of the story XD

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Alexander, or as he was called by his immediate family and closest of friends, Sasha, was directly related to the Soviet Union of old, and still spoke their ancient language. What most of the ground dwellers and air folk didn't realize was that their was an entire civilization underground, who still had working machinery. Before the great war that changed the world, the soviets had placed their most intellectual people, alongside with the most physically fit people their great nation had to offer. So when the war happened, they were all underground.
Sasha was the product of the intellectuals and the Olympic champions. Strong, smart and flexible. However, he was smarter, and even stronger then the rest. That's why he was chosen to go to the surface, and find out how these strange people, with their odd beasts and magic, could be beaten, subdued, and destroyed over time.
Sasha's people had the ancient technology, and the best minds and bodies anyone could have asked for. But their was a problem. The years underground had led to a lack of a large genetic pool, and this caused redundancies in peoples genetic coding. This turned some people into ravishing madmen, and some into timid mice.

This plagued Sasha's people, and they realized that they needed to expand, so that they could also expand the genetic pool of their people.

As Sasha stepped out into the sun for the first time, he could barley see (Fallout 3 reference for anyone XD). After a few moments, his eyes adjusted, and he stumbled forward, towards what he thought was a city. As he approched the walls, he shouted "Priviet Komrad!" (Hello comrade) to the guards at the gate. However, as the ground dwellers were the remains of the Americans, they only spoke English. The odd language startled the guards, and they shouted back "Stay back, or we will fire upon you" as they drew their bows. Sasha could not understand them, but noticed the primitive weapons, and knew they meant him harm. He pulled out a machine pistol, and started to fire at the guards. The seemingly magic flashes and the guards dropping startled the commander at the gate, who finally shouted the order to fire. The remaining guards let loose a barrage of arrows upon Sasha. Sasha managed to avoid most of them, but one caught him on his shoulder, and he fell. Realizing that one man could not take out this garrison, he was surrounded by foot soldiers, and brought in front of the general.

TO BE CONTINUED IN PART TWO!!!!
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welovehina

well it seems to have died, but im more than happy to start this thread up again! as of now, it doesnt seem to have computers, but im sure we can incorporate some tech like that into it.

TheWolf

EXCELLENT writing quirk, you crazy man!!!!!
you to meri - keep it coming - i KNOW your brain is exploding with stuff!!!!

TheWolf

i'd like in if it's not too late - enter the warrior-priest - servant of the one true God!!!
[he's a good guy in case you couldn't tell but rather annoyingly self righteous at times]

i'd be willing to proof read as well...

TheWolf

i think maybe it's a good idea for my character to have a big old lobo wolf companion - a loner just like tomas - the warrior-priest.

tomas found this Meri healer interesting - clumsy and a little amusing @ times - but one of her more unusual characteristics was this "pet" of hers called "shells". a more different choice in companions tomas had never seen. a curious creature - always scrurrying about sideways - going somewhere with nowhere to go. and while the claws on the creature DID look formiddible - it spent most of its time hiding behind its master. VERY curious...
tomas was a little afraid wolf might eat the creature - but wolf seemed just as intrigued as his master by the animal - keeping his distance, but constantly aware of its scurryings.

TheWolf

nice. meri - is there a recent compilation of everything or are we due to compile in a txt file. i've been reading the entire thread but it's very broken up that way.

also do you need a proof reader yet?

tomas wandered the camp warily eyeing his new companions. always alone before this, he was unsure of his feelings in relation to each one. the group was as varied as any group could be - each having strengths and weaknesses the complimented the other. where did he fit in with this managerie of misfits? could he work with these strange races, many of whom practiced the new majicks discovered in this war ravaged land.
the only one he REALLY felt comfortable with was wolf - his longtime friend. well, maybe friend was the wrong word to use - he and wolf shared a battlelust and desire to fight for "the right". yes, tomas admitted to himself, wolf was THAT intelligent - knowing right from wrong - good from evil.
maybe that was why wolf stayed even though tomas had joined this motley crew. whatever his reasons, tomas was glad to still have wolf by his side - a loner not quite alone in this new and strange land.

TheWolf

i'm not sure where yet as i'm still reading the thread to catch up. if i need to make changes or drop sections i will. it's all just off the top of my head rite now.

the compiled version would help me ALOT as it's hard for me to keep it straight reading the thread.

btw - LOL's name is dd.

TheWolf

Tomas noticed Wolfs' hackles raise, as a low, almost silent growl escaped his snarling lips. With a word to Wolf and careful to make no movement that might attract attention, Tomas' eyes scanned the horizon. There - off toward the Northern Forest ... movement.

Tomas sighed. He knew his solitude would not last, but had hoped for more time. After his conversion to serving The One True God, he had entered the mountains to commune with his God and live alone. Now this. None lived in the Northern Forest due to the wildness and even savagery of the country. So if Tomas saw movement, it cried for investigation.

Sure enough - after days of searching, Tomas found the cause of the movement he had seen. A black knight - quite formidable looking, had set up camp and had underlings building an encampment. But why here of all places, thought Tomas, it was so remote as to be completely removed from any of the local population ... but wait! of course, Tomas mused, this smacks of an initial invasion force.

Just as Tomas turned to leave this hopeful invader to his machinations, another surprise caught his eye. Why had Wolf not sounded upon her approach? Thru the forest an elven girl soundlessly, but awkwardly, stalked the black knight as well. Tomas was amazed at her ability for silence - she almost seemed to fall at every third step. Wolf just watched with interest - no warning growl - no desire to attack. Curious. And what was that purple movement at her feet. Not discernable at this distance - it bode further investigation.

As Tomas watched, the black knight packed up with a few of his attendants and left, his main force staying behind to expand the encampment. After the departure of the black knight, the elven girl left as well - the purple movement about her feet leaving with her.

Knowing a change was coming, Tomas turned, following the girl.

The girl finally reached her camp. This looks like a permanent camp, brooded Tomas. Hmmm ... I would have sworn noone lived in the Northern Forest - and yet here's the girl, he thought to himself. Newfound respect for this young elf rose in his mind. Tomas was jarred back to paying attention upon hearing "Shell - snack time!!" her voice had a lilting quality to it - almost as if she sang it. But before he could process this new perspective of the elven girl he watched - up scrambled a purple crab to her lap! "Does Shell love Meri?" she sang. Meri - that must be her name. But what in the name of The One True God was that thing doing on her lap? The girl fed bits of something to the purple thing as she gently cooed at it. This girl was definately strange. Living alone in the Northern Forest with a purple crab - curious.

It had been hours since the girl, Meri, had gone to sleep. Even the strange purple crab had ceased movement. Tomas decided it was time to leave. With a nod to Wolf, he stood and silently strode off into the night.

Back in the mountains,in his own camp, Tomas finally unwound. Wolfs' head under his hand as the lobo lay beside him, he pondered all he had witnessed in the last few days. Sure that the covert arrival of the black knight had the broodings of war, Tomas steeled himself for the decision that must come. Run or fight. And Tomas never was much of a runner. After quietly praying to The One True God, Tomas slowly drifted off to a wary, fitful sleep, visions of ominous black knights and one clumsy elven girl disturbing his rest.

Wolf raised his head. It had been weeks since their excursion and Tomas was preparing to head to the capital, to try to warn the government of this hidden force in the remote Northern Forest. He watched Wolf and even though his companion's attentions were directed at the base of the mountain, the lobos’ easy manner confused him. Usually when Wolf sensed someone or something his hackles went up and a low throaty growl would inadvertently escape his drawn back lips.

All of a sudden, it became apparent for Wolfs' strange behavior. "Shells, it's snack time!" lilted gently up from the rocky paths below. A wry grin creased Tomas' face - why i think Wolf is smitten with that girl!, he thought to himself. Shouldering his pack - they made their way down the mountainside, where they knew they'd find a small elven girl with a purple crab.

There she was. Tomas quietly materialized inside her camp perimeter and waited. The girl looked up and stared, as if she wasn't sure she was seeing correctly. It finally registered that there WAS a tall enigmatic man with a very large lobo wolf by his side right there in front of her! She tumbled backward falling all over herself, yet eerily silent in her clumsy bid to get away! She had drawn an old samari sword quite quickly and held it tremblingly out in front of her, the crab cowering behind her legs with bits of food still hanging from it's mouth.

"Wait." Tomas held his hands out. "I'm not going to hurt you Meri - it is Meri, right?"
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TheWolf

more to come later - tearing up house today to lay a floor - it'll probably be days before i get back to this

TheWolf

Meri;173975 wrote
Yeah I know it's not much... :P

that's some cute artwork, meri!!!

i'm done with my floor [and half-dead too] and back online so i'll write some more maybe tomorrow?

thanx for the compilation meri!! do you have it in a txt or doc file of it you could upload too? if not that's ok - don't do it special for me ...

my computer is not re-setup yet :51: - i'm using my laptop right now ... tore up half of the house to do the floor and the floor's done but the house is still tore up!:em04:

i'm REALLY enjoying this story thing - thanx MUCH for the idea to start it welovehina!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TheWolf

Here's my character with story so far

[spoiler]
[SIZE=5][COLOR=#000060][SIZE=2]Name: [/SIZE][/COLOR][/SIZE][COLOR=#000060]Tomas [Toe - maas’][/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000060]Age: [/COLOR][COLOR=#000060]52 but strong and fit[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000060]Skin: Suntanned[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000060]Hair: Brown[/COLOR][COLOR=#000060] with a full mustache and beard[/COLOR][COLOR=#000060].[/COLOR][COLOR=#000060] White at the temples and interspersed in the beard and hair.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000060]Race: Human[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]--------------------------------[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]Tomas noticed Wolfs' hackles raise, as a low, almost silent growl escaped his snarling lips. With a word to Wolf and careful to make no movement that might attract attention, Tomas' eyes scanned the horizon. There - off toward the Northern Forest ... movement.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]Tomas sighed. He knew his solitude would not last, but had hoped for more time. After his conversion to serving The One True God, he had entered the mountains to commune with his God and live alone. Now this. None lived in the Northern Forest due to the wildness and even savagery of the country. So if Tomas saw movement, it cried for investigation.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]Sure enough - after days of searching, Tomas found the cause of the movement he had seen. A black knight - quite formidable looking, had set up camp and had underlings building an encampment. But why here of all places, thought Tomas, it was so remote as to be completely removed from any of the local population ... but wait! of course, Tomas mused, this smacks of an initial invasion force.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]Just as Tomas turned to leave this hopeful invader to his machinations, another surprise caught his eye. Why had Wolf not sounded upon her approach? Thru the forest an elven girl soundlessly, but awkwardly, stalked the black knight as well. Tomas was amazed at her ability for silence - she almost seemed to fall at every third step. Wolf just watched with interest - no warning growl - no desire to attack. Curious. And what was that purple movement at her feet. Not discernable at this distance - it bode further investigation.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]As Tomas watched, the black knight packed up with a few of his attendants and left, his main force staying behind to expand the encampment. After the departure of the black knight, the elven girl left as well - the purple movement about her feet leaving with her.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]Knowing a change was coming, Tomas turned, following the girl.[/COLOR]

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[COLOR=#000060]The girl finally reached her camp. This looks like a permanent camp, brooded Tomas. Hmmm ... I would have sworn noone lived in the Northern Forest - and yet here's the girl, he thought to himself. Newfound respect for this young elf rose in his mind. Tomas was jarred back to paying attention upon hearing "Shell - snack time!!" her voice had a lilting quality to it - almost as if she sang it. But before he could process this new perspective of the elven girl he watched - up scrambled a purple crab to her lap! "Does Shell love Meri?" she sang. Meri - that must be her name. But what in the name of The One True God was that thing doing on her lap? The girl fed bits of something to the purple thing as she gently cooed at it. This girl was definately strange. Living alone in the Northern Forest with a purple crab - curious.[/COLOR]

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[COLOR=#000060]It had been hours since the girl, Meri, had gone to sleep. Even the strange purple crab had ceased movement. Tomas decided it was time to leave. With a nod to Wolf, he stood and silently strode off into the night.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]Back in the mountains,in his own camp, Tomas finally unwound. Wolfs' head under his hand as the lobo lay beside him, he pondered all he had witnessed in the last few days. Sure that the covert arrival of the black knight had the broodings of war, Tomas steeled himself for the decision that must come. Run or fight. And Tomas never was much of a runner. After quietly praying to The One True God, Tomas slowly drifted off to a wary, fitful sleep, visions of ominous black knights and one clumsy elven girl disturbing his rest. [/COLOR]

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[COLOR=#000060]Wolf raised his head. It had been weeks since their excursion and Tomas was preparing to head to the capital, to try to warn the government of this hidden force in the remote Northern Forest. He watched Wolf and even though his companion's attentions were directed at the base of the mountain, the lobos’ easy manner confused him. Usually when Wolf sensed someone or something his hackles went up and a low throaty growl would inadvertently escape his drawn back lips.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]All of a sudden, it became apparent for Wolfs' strange behavior. "Shells, it's snack time!" lilted gently up from the rocky paths below. A wry grin creased Tomas' face - why i think Wolf is smitten with that girl!, he thought to himself. Shouldering his pack - they made their way down the mountainside, where they knew they'd find a small elven girl with a purple crab.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]There she was. Tomas quietly materialized inside her camp perimeter and waited. The girl looked up and stared, as if she wasn't sure she was seeing correctly. It finally registered that there WAS a tall enigmatic man with a very large lobo wolf by his side right there in front of her! She tumbled backward falling all over herself, yet eerily silent in her clumsy bid to get away! She had drawn an old samari sword quite quickly and held it tremblingly out in front of her, the crab cowering behind her legs with bits of food still hanging from it's mouth.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]"Wait." Tomas held his hands out. "I'm not going to hurt you Meri - it is Meri, right?"[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]-------------------------------[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]"Who are you?" Meri blurted at Tomas. "How do you know me?" Her sword trembled and then lowered after some silent communication between Wolf and her. Tomas noticed the sword was still held at ready, though lowered, as she waited for his answer.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]Tomas spent the next few hours explaining about the black knight (I saw him too! Meri exclaimed), his study of her in her camp and his subsequent trip back home. He continued with his plan to head for the capitol (I am too! Meri blurted out) to warn them of the impending invasion. And finally how he had heard her use her own name while cooing at the strange purple crab. Meri blushed and stumbled for words.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]After agreeing to travel together (at least for now) they made camp. [/COLOR]

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[COLOR=#000060]As Tomas watched Meri sleep, he thought on his past. Meri reminded him so much of Melina.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]It was twenty years ago that Tomas had been converted to his faith in The One True God. After a particularly gruesome campaign of conquest, when trolling the battlefield for living friends or enemies, one to save and the other to end, he came upon a child. The orphan sat with one dead warriors' head on her lap.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]"What are you doing here girl?" Tomas growled. "Saying goodbye to my father, Sir," she replied. Tomas stopped in his tracks. Robbing the bodies, he expected to hear, but not that. Now he noticed the tears on her cheeks and the gravity of her situation hit home. "You don't belong here." Tomas half choked, half rumbled at her. "Run along!"[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]"I forgive you," she replied. Tomas stopped again in shock. "What?" he roared. "I said I forgive you" she meekly responded. What was she talking about - forgiving him? Tomas thought for a moment and then told her "I didn't kill your father." [/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]"I believe you, Sir, but you are part of the invading force from the islands in the sky, are you not?" she asked. Not waiting for an answer, she continued. "Then you are just as responsible for every death here. My father had been doing research on a very old religion from the Time Before Time and found a book telling of The One True God. God says in there that I must forgive you."[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]Tomas's heart was pierced through with these words. "What is your name, girl?" Tomas asked. "Melina, Sir" she replied. "Tell me more of this One True God." he responded. With that he scooped her up in his arms and left the invading force[/COLOR][COLOR=#000060], with Melina as his new daughter[/COLOR][COLOR=#000060]. [/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000060]Fifteen years later, a young woman now, she died in his arms[/COLOR][COLOR=#000060], ravaged by the sickness that had hit the village[/COLOR][COLOR=#000060]. All he had left of her was the ancient Bible she had given him and the faith she had trained him in of The One True God. Leaving the small town where they had lived as father and daughter, Tomas headed for the high mountains. It was there he had found Wolf, an abandonded pup. Tomas raised Wolf as his companion in the wilderness[/COLOR][COLOR=#000060], but the animal had retained much of his wild nature[/COLOR][COLOR=#000060].[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000060]And now this. It looked like someone on the floating islands was bent on conquest on the Lost Continent, Tomas’ new home.[/COLOR][SIZE=5][COLOR=#000060][SIZE=2]He would not hide in the mountains while this took place. Yes he was just one man, but Tomas knew The One True God’s power to effect whatever change He wished in this world.[/SIZE][/COLOR][/SIZE]

[SIZE=5][COLOR=#000060][SIZE=2]Tomas looked over at Meri - brought back to the present with his musings. And this clumsy elf girl - what of her? Had she lived alone in the Northern Forest for many years? What of her parents? And why did Wolf behave almost as a tame pup around her? Did she have some power over animals? Did she have magic?[/SIZE][/COLOR][/SIZE]

[SIZE=5][SIZE=2][COLOR=#000060]His questions would have to wait, he thought, as sleep finally claimed him. Tomas trusted Wolf to wake him should there be any need or if an intuder showed up.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
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i'm writing in the third person perspective and i'm wondering if i should shift to the first person. anybody have any recommendations, ideas, demands for me?

thanx for the suggestion to open all the spoilers, Meri - that worked great and i put it all in a text file. no need for yours.

TheWolf

really nice twist meri! actually a twist within a twist!!!
good writing too!!!:happy:

TheWolf

that's really good we! :bow:

i'll have to get somemore done too
[wolf races the quirk to get his story in first!]

TheWolf

the story continues ...

[spoiler]The biting wind woke Tomas with a start - and while quite cold from the wind, Tomas lay perfectly still so as to place the sounds of the early morning one by one in his mind. Once satisfied that no danger lurked nearby Tomas rose with the fluidity and animal grace of Wolf - as Wolf now stood beside him.

Meri still slept soundly, with the crab dug into the ground at her waist. Tomas decided to recon the area again, having gone over their surroundings in a cursory fashion last night. Walking ever increasing circular motions - nothing out of the ordinary was found. Tomas decided to go to the nearby cliffside and get some water from the small falls that were there. Upon kneeling at the stream, the hair on Tomas's neck stood up.

Why had he told Wolf to remain with Meri? - but no - that was as it should be. Slowly, hand on the hilt of his broadsword, Tomas rose. By now the smell of brimstone and sulfur filled the air. Tomas waited, relaxed now and praying to The One True God. With a confidence and reasurance that he knew did not come from himself, Tomas spun - brandishing his broadsword - now awash with a piercingly white light.

Before him stood a demon - greater than any he'd encountered before.
"I will go devour the welp you travel with after i have dispatched you - useless human!" The greater demon's words writhed out off his mouth like acid. "Do your worst demon", Tomas replied, "I can but give my life for The One True God." and with that - Tomas attacked.

His first swing of the blazing broadsword opened the demons chest - cleaving the ribcage in two. the demon writhed back in pain - seared by the blinding blades' pass. The sound of one thousand souls in agony escaped from the cavity. The Demon clutched his chest with one massive hand and swung at Tomas with the other. Tomas fell backwards to avoid the impossibly long arm ending in blackened razor-like talons. Tomas, on the gound now, seems at a terrible disadvantage. Quickly the massive demon jumped over Tomas prostrate body, one foot on either side. Still cluching his chest together, the demon raised the other arm for his death blow, when Tomas drove his supernaturally infused blade into the grotesque demonic skull - splitting it assunder.

With the lingering smell of brimstone - the demon whisped away to nothing - it's soul wrenching cries fading with it's presence. Tomas lay on his back holding his now inert broadsword breathing hard - but thanking his God.

Returning to camp with the water, Tomas started the coffee. Meri slept on - oblivious to the danger just passed her by. Wolf was still sniffing Tomas over - was it the brimstone or was he checking for wounds, Tomas mused as he poured his coffee. Taking his first sip, Tomas couldn't help releasing a contented sigh. Next to fighting [and killing] demons - coffee was his favorite pastime!

The small noises Tomas was making finally roused Meri from her sleep. Tomas watched as the small elfen girl stretched, ruffled her hair and started mumbling to herself. All of a sudden she froze - eyes on Tomas! Laughter rumbled up and out of his mouth at the surprised and shocked look on Meri's face. Meri blushed as her hands went to her hair, trying to straighten it out from the sleeping mess that it was. Shells, the purple crab buried in the sand where she sat, burst from his hole, spinning nonsensically until it had located Meri's backside - where he glared and cowered. Tomas laughed anew.

"Please keep your ferocious crab at bay!" Tomas chucked, "he's so intimidating!" Meri grinned sheepishly - "He's not the bravest sort, I guess" she said, "but Shells is my best friend, nevertheless." As Meri helped herself to the coffee, Tomas told her of his encounter with the demon. She listened with wonder and concern, unsure why it would want to "eat" her. Tomas explained that the demonic race was the provider of many majiks in the world today and that they stood against anything "good" in all the races.

After a meager breafast Tomas, Wolf, Meri and Shells started off again on their journey to the capital. Tomas just hoped they were not to late in notifying the authorities of the impending invasion.

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your turn meri ...

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