Poems

rjd22

ofcourse we havta post poems in the fanfiction forum so post them now

Live is Like a Spindle

If you think it is the end it is just the beginning

RJD22

Mich

hm.. cat, hat....? :yeahh:
[COLOR=darkslategray]btw i have a lot of poems, but theyre in swedish :P, so i dont think you guys would understand what im writing about .[/COLOR]

Mich

kuota;14404 wrote
its ok mich you can still post them:happy:

heh ok, but none of you would understand it :P but ok i will :)

Mich

kuota;14411 wrote
lol it doesnt matter its the thought that counts :yeahh:

okaay. :) i have one :)

and its called: [COLOR=darkorchid]Ledsen & ensam![/COLOR]
ok here it goes:

[COLOR=darkorchid]Schh! Lyssna vad e det som låter?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Det är någon som gråter. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Kan det vara mig själv?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Det enda jag får höra är[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]tjat, tjat, tjat[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]om att jag är lat. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Ingen vet hur jag mår,[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]det är bara jag som förstår. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Ja, det är en gåta,[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]när jag själv hör mig gråta.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Livet är som en stor röra,[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]kan ingen annan höra?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Jag är ensam.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Ingen ger mig en hjälpande hand...[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]som då när jag förlorade min första tand.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Helt hjälplös ute i kylan alldeles själv.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Och där står jag nu helt bortglömd och frusen till döds.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]stackars lilla flicka..[/COLOR]
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wrote this when i was 14 years old :P ^^

Mich

kuota;14439 wrote
mich i sort of got the picture on your poem but i could be wrong : i use translator hehe i wish i could write poems T_T

haha cheater ^^ jk. :P well if you want to i can try to translate it in eng, but it wouldnt sound good cause if i translate it, it doesnt ryhme.. :P
of course you can write poems, just use you imagination and your fantasy ^^.

Mich

kuota;14476 wrote
T.Tok ill try.... thanx for your inspiration mich!!!^

mhm no problems :D

Xyw13

Cool both od U... I don't have the talent to write poems, but maybe, I write some novel.

Genjuu_Mugon

[SIZE=3][FONT=Times New Roman]I wrote this last year in the middle of class. I don't know why or what compelled me. [/FONT][/SIZE]

[CENTER][SIZE=3][FONT=Times New Roman]Prose or moan?[/FONT][/SIZE]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]We are children, children of men are we[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]It matters not if we are either Adam or Eve[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]We are the future; as Fate seems to read[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Though opposite to Fates mead[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Will seems to write[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Much to its own delight[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]But the Will does not act on its own[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3](much to its moan)[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]It is the action of We;[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Its our Decree![/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Though it seems fates influence is sole in our life[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3](and feel it may be only for spite)[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]As you can see neither nor none act on their own[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]It is an eternal circle… none acts alone?[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]So we are equal to Fate and Will (are we kin?)[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]As three all are dictators and followers (is it sin?)[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Like the Magi doth you know[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Though of how we could act to change (as the crow)[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Though Fate seems to read[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]As if by Will’s creed[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]If we could act on our own we control and[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Make Fate, Will, We as one (as if a sole pround band)[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]But… Ones own acts lead to Will[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]and Will leads to Fate[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]While then, Fate leads to We as if to remake[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Are We influenced by Fate? By Will?[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Or are we by ourselves? The circle endure[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]A genesis of Uniform Entity Instrumentality[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Could not be possible, for these acts[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Could not be possible, independent of one another[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Perhaps if they could, it would give birth to Omnipotent Sentience – as one[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]But…would that Omnipotent Sentience wish to give life?[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Would it make life ? so one day they would be as thee[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Give us Will; which adds to Fate – as the circle dictates[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]And another circle will give birth with haste[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Prehaps our circle is only a small part[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]A component of a larger circle in never-ending arc[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]One circle factorializes to another, and soon to no end[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]So is there nothing that could mend?[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Mayhaps its Fate, We, or Will[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]How it to be!?! Shall we never comprehend?[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]May it be so, either if we be Sentient[/SIZE][/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Or destructed in our future[/SIZE][/FONT]
[SIZE=3][FONT=Times New Roman]Let it... proceed… have it faith… [/FONT][/SIZE]
[FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]So our future We can Partake![/SIZE][/FONT][/CENTER]

Genjuu_Mugon

Xyw13;14422 wrote
Cool both od U... I don't have the talent to write poems, but maybe, I write some novel.

Not to worry as poetry does not come from talent but from the heart.
It does not matter if you are good at it or not. Poetry is measured in effort and meaning, not quality.
Well, that just what I think though.

GhostHeLL

[COLOR=Red][COLOR=Navy]My [/COLOR][COLOR=Green]Mini [/COLOR][COLOR=Purple]Poems [/COLOR][/COLOR][COLOR=Red][/COLOR][COLOR=Red]in order of creation [/COLOR][COLOR=Red][/COLOR][COLOR=Red][/COLOR][COLOR=Red][/COLOR]
[COLOR=Red]<1>"[/COLOR][COLOR=Blue]Death is an Awesome feeling that One must go thru at least Twice in a Life Time[/COLOR][COLOR=Red]"
[/COLOR]
[COLOR=Red]<2> [COLOR=Blue][COLOR=Red]"[/COLOR]Life is like a Mine ready to explode when you least expect it too[COLOR=Red]"[/COLOR][/COLOR]

<3> [COLOR=Blue][COLOR=Red]"[/COLOR]Life is like a passing Spring...A Cool Breeze that flows over you...never stopping till the time comes asunder[COLOR=Red]"[/COLOR][/COLOR]

<4 Hail>[COLOR=Blue] [COLOR=Red]"[/COLOR]Let the Snow be your model...Let the brush flow with your mind...For the beauty that shines in the eye takes your breath away[COLOR=Red]"[/COLOR]

[COLOR=Red]<5 solitude>[/COLOR] [COLOR=Red]"[/COLOR]I gave u my word...u spat it back at me...I gave u my arm...u sliced it off from me...I gave u my pity...u turned it down...I gave u my soul...U sold it to the Devil...Now I give u my forgiveness...& yet u chose to seal ur self to eternal Damnation[COLOR=Red]"[/COLOR]
[COLOR=DarkOrange]`````````````````````````````^^ :music: :karaoke: :music2: ^^{[/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR]}[COLOR=Red][COLOR=Blue][/COLOR][/COLOR][COLOR=Red][COLOR=Blue]```````````````````````````

XD These can't really be called poems, but what the heck I felt like posting them XD
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Kohta

Mich;14403 wrote
hm.. cat, hat....? :yeahh:
[COLOR=darkslategray]btw i have a lot of poems, but theyre in swedish :P, so i dont think you guys would understand what im writing about .[/COLOR]

its ok mich you can still post them:happy:

Kohta

Mich;14409 wrote
heh ok, but none of you would understand it :P but ok i will :)

lol it doesnt matter its the thought that counts :yeahh:

Kohta

Mich;14413 wrote
okaay. :) i have one :)

and its called: [COLOR=darkorchid]Ledsen & ensam![/COLOR]
ok here it goes:

[COLOR=darkorchid]Schh! Lyssna vad e det som låter?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Det är någon som gråter. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Kan det vara mig själv?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Det enda jag får höra är[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]tjat, tjat, tjat[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]om att jag är lat. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Ingen vet hur jag mår,[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]det är bara jag som förstår. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Ja, det är en gåta,[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]när jag själv hör mig gråta.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Livet är som en stor röra,[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]kan ingen annan höra?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Jag är ensam.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Ingen ger mig en hjälpande hand...[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]som då när jag förlorade min första tand.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Helt hjälplös ute i kylan alldeles själv.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]Och där står jag nu helt bortglömd och frusen till döds.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#9932cc]stackars lilla flicka..[/COLOR]

wrote this when i was 14 years old :P ^

mich i sort of got the picture on your poem but i could be wrong : i use translator hehe i wish i could write poems T_T

Kohta

Mich;14461 wrote
haha cheater ^^ jk. :P well if you want to i can try to translate it in eng, but it wouldnt sound good cause if i translate it, it doesnt ryhme.. :P
of course you can write poems, just use you imagination and your fantasy ^^.

T.Tok ill try.... thanx for your inspiration mich!!!^^

RiSei

Angel, angel can you hear me
Won’t you try to answer me
Has my signal grown weaker than moonlight
Does this transmission convey my grief

We are lost in wars and silence
Dark November over all our lives
People pass by without speaking
Cold despair in their eyes

So many have taken refuge
In religion and in lies
Just empty words in tired living
Without the hope that you provide

Angel, angel are you in heaven, or in prison
Dying to be free….
Alone and cold, barely breathing
Too weak to press the transmit key

(adapted from life during wartime)

mjsh83

very nice.... maybe when i get married and live with my wife for many years, i will feel the same XD O.<

Kari_ufo

Mich;14403 wrote
hm.. cat, hat....? :yeahh:
[COLOR=darkslategray]btw i have a lot of poems, but theyre in swedish :P, so i dont think you guys would understand what im writing about .[/COLOR]

Please post them or at least send them to me, it got me interested, since im Swedish.

i will try to come with something to write as well but not now.

TheWolf

Mich;14461 wrote
haha cheater ^^ jk. :P well if you want to i can try to translate it in eng, but it wouldnt sound good cause if i translate it, it doesnt ryhme.. :P
of course you can write poems, just use you imagination and your fantasy ^^.

don't know if you're still here Mich, but i'd be interested in seeing that translated - even if it doesn't rhyme. it would be prose then, but i've read some really good prose.

a song i wrote my wife:

As Long As We Are We

When I first met you many years ago
I told you I would marry you this I Know
You let me stay round - you didn't make me leave
And thru the years you have finally come to see

As long as I'm with you - As long as you're with me
I don't care what we do - As long as we are we
As long as I'm with you - As long as you're with me
I don't care what we do - As long as we are we

We've both had times when we thot only of ourselves
But as we've grown we put that noise up on the shelf
We're cleaving together we are becoming one
and when I cleave with you, cleaving has been so much fun

As long as I'm with you - As long as you're with me
I don't care what we do - As long as we are we
As long as I'm with you - As long as you're with me
I don't care what we do - As long as we are we

As long as we are we
As long as we are we
:romance:

TheWolf

GhostHeLL;14490 wrote
[COLOR=red][COLOR=blue][COLOR=red]<5 solitude>[/COLOR] [COLOR=red]"[/COLOR]I gave u my word...u spat it back at me...I gave u my arm...u sliced it off from me...I gave u my pity...u turned it down...I gave u my soul...U sold it to the Devil...Now I give u my forgiveness...& yet u chose to seal ur self to eternal Damnation[COLOR=red]"[/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR]

i really like this one Ghost!

GhostHeLL;14490 wrote
[COLOR=red][COLOR=red]XD These can't really be called poems, but what the heck I felt like posting them XD[/COLOR][/COLOR]

these are called "prose" a type of poem that doesn't rhyme.
[spoiler]1 a: the ordinary language people use in speaking or writing b: a literary medium distinguished from poetry especially by its greater irregularity and variety of rhythm and its closer correspondence to the patterns of everyday speech2: a prosaic style, quality, or condition
[/spoiler]they're pretty good too, btw!